Each heading on the page is now a sentence about what a café gets, each sentence carries one idea, and the page names the areas a café would use before describing them. The questions at the end cover the same ground for readers who go straight to them. The same rules now apply to every public page that describes Magpie for a kind of business.
A plainer page for coffee shops
The page for coffee shops and cafés lists the six areas a café would use, and every heading says what the café gets from one.